What do you think of my novel so far?

Sort of terrible. "All in Mrs. Wayne's cl"? Do you mean everyone in the cl? Or throughout the whole cl? Your punctuation and grammar need a lot of work. I can't even read this until the glaring errors are fixed. WAY too many commas. "I did my combination". Too many of those types of words. DID? That can mean so many things. How about "I spun my combination" or something? Sorry, this is just not ping muster.